Right now, the hardest part about writing my essay is that I keep wanting to change it. I don’t like how I dont have names for the characters- its just the narrator and the lover with a husband. I think that it’s confusing and that having names would make this seem a lot less confusing for me. Also, I think I am having trouble with evidence, I think I am jumping around and not staying in my sub-story, so I need to quit doing that. Also, the more I think about my essay the more I doubt which sub story I am writing about. I’m not really sure why, but I just keep doubting myself on this essay. I think I might just start completely over to help me get over this doubt. If the due date was moved to Thursday that would help me alot so I could do that. Well, I think that about sums my paper up for me….it’s just full of doubt, sooo I have no idea really. haha
yeah i feel the exact same way about mine! i think we actually might be writing about the same story about the two “lovers” having the affair. i am a little bit confused but i feel like i’ve gone so far that i don’t want to go back and re-think everything. i changed my sub story from the blog we wrote in the beginning before i actually wrote the full paper so it wasn’t that bad. but now that we’ve written an entire 4 page draft i think you might want to just re-read the story a few more times to help you maybe organize your thoughts better.
if you feel like you don’t like your essay’s topic just free write a few paragraphs on a new topic and see how it goes. The names were a little confusing but I think a few minutes of revision cold fix that, just be really careful. Overall i liked the paper and i felt like it had some really interesting points.
well the paper that you have wrote now isn’t as bad as you think it is. at times yes it was confusing with no names but the overall topic that you chose was good. but i know how you feel. if your not into the paper its going to reflect in the paper. but i thought your paper did well with the subject that we were given. if you decide to change though good luck! (i hope she does change the due date too!)